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Leon looked at Odin with a mixture of resignation and disbelief. "You really want me to go negotiate with the Empire? Is this another setup?"
Odin, standing with a composed expression, replied, "That’s why we selected you, Leon. This mission holds significant symbolic value. The Empire needs to understand the strength of the Dragon Clan."
Rosvisser smirked, standing next to Leon, and remarked, "So, you’re truly letting him go?" There was a playful, yet slightly mocking tone in her voice.
Isha, Rosvisser’s elder sister, joined in with a smirk of her own. "Don’t worry, Leon. You’ll be fine. It’s not …
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Lately the chapters have been confusing as hell
You mean the plot? Or hard to read?
Mainly the names, sometimes you wrote Helena when in fact Claudia was the one talking. Idk if its the author or the translation but that made me hella confuse and i had to double read. There's the possibility that my reading comprehension went to shit.
Can you be more specific about which chapters you're talking about? I'll check.
I concur. Since chapter 26, a lot of the names are all used in the wrong sentences. Text looks fine, but for example in chapter 26, Isha, Rossweiss, and Leon's names were all mixed up. Claudia sometimes. During the confession of Leon's identity to Isabella. It was very confusing there and also between the duologue between Leon and Odin in chapter 29. I'd say the contents look fine just for some reason the names were all over the place, not clear who's talking unless someone paid attention since the beginning and guessed.
Thanks for the clarification! I'll be a little free now and check it out!