arvuu

arvuu
17 December, 2024

Please fix the this and the next chapters. The names are completely wrong, pronauns and such are wrong and story makes no sense.

arvuu
15 December, 2024

Around chapter 240, the writer starts to add all the chapter endings to author notes, which arent added to the chapters here. Causing quite a bit of the story missing and confusion of whats going on in the story. Please add those parts here as well :( Really enjoying this story, but missing so much story is very disruptive to reading.

arvuu
15 December, 2024

Whats with this continuation in notes… theres massive chunks missing in the story which i assume havent been added here :(

arvuu
15 December, 2024

Im worried for Evie and Rens now sailing ship QwQ. What is Saya going to do? I hope it doesnt ruin their thing QwQ

arvuu
30 November, 2024

If you make these paid chapers, atleast proof read them.
”Translated with DeepL.com (free version)” smh

arvuu
28 November, 2024

Pretty good main story, but side plots can be hit or miss. Has smut every once in a while and turns to harem in around halfway point (currently on chapter 311.2) Has decent power fantasy, but it misses that little something to be good. Makes it a bit more realistic in that sense but also doesnt. World building is pretty ok and characters are likable.

arvuu
28 November, 2024

Good power fantasy smut with confident male lead. Story is ok and world building is good. Gives you very satisfying resolutions to plotslines and builds on them as the story goes.

arvuu
17 November, 2024

Amazing story that after finishing it, left me wanting more, both in good and bad. Ending felt a bit rushed by the writer and i would have wanted to see more of the romance side and less of the acting on the latter half of the story. Still reccommending this very much as its addictive read.